Please choose one girl and one guy. These sketches are from the "healthy eating and snack tips". I thought yogurt would be a good example of a healthy snack.
Sad...apparently my original comments that I had made last week didn't get posted! i did also like D, but i preferred A. The final sketches make the female look so old though! And the male, well, he looks like he has to close his eyes to eat the stuff and or he's meditating on it. My coworker thought he was blowing bubbles. Ideas: For the female...change her outfit...maybe soemthing "Flashdance-like", something assymetrical, off the shoulder with a tank under and a pair of jeans or something. She doesn't have to be thin either, can definitely give her some meat. As for the male...I don't know. He looks old too, and I really don't know any shaved bald teens with "manscruff and a goti."
Teen comments... Yay on the female; good hair, outfit and jewlery. One other teen, preferred you put another earing and put her in a tank. The male...like his hair. Another said, his buzz looked like a headband. another said they didn't like the fact his eyes were closed. Improvements: Change the shirt color on the male. Maybe white inner shirt with an outer shirt with stripes that can be blue or black.
I like image D for girls and image B for the guys.
ReplyDeleteSad...apparently my original comments that I had made last week didn't get posted! i did also like D, but i preferred A. The final sketches make the female look so old though! And the male, well, he looks like he has to close his eyes to eat the stuff and or he's meditating on it. My coworker thought he was blowing bubbles.
ReplyDeleteIdeas: For the female...change her outfit...maybe soemthing "Flashdance-like", something assymetrical, off the shoulder with a tank under and a pair of jeans or something. She doesn't have to be thin either, can definitely give her some meat. As for the male...I don't know. He looks old too, and I really don't know any shaved bald teens with "manscruff and a goti."
I like D for the female. Both A and B look like old men, unfortunately, and it would be better to have his eyes open rather than closed.
ReplyDeleteThe final sketches are great!
ReplyDeleteMuch better! I really like the girl!
ReplyDeleteii'm starting to realize that when i was away, i missed a lot of the initial voting. love the final sketches.
ReplyDeleteTeen comments...
ReplyDeleteYay on the female; good hair, outfit and jewlery. One other teen, preferred you put another earing and put her in a tank.
The male...like his hair. Another said, his buzz looked like a headband. another said they didn't like the fact his eyes were closed.
Improvements:
Change the shirt color on the male. Maybe white inner shirt with an outer shirt with stripes that can be blue or black.